Hi my name is Jo sung-il, My essay will be about the High rise of Taiwan cemetery.
This essay is about the High rise. There is a website named Highrise visit Mr Garrioch's blog, www.Glps15.blogspot.com , in there you can click the title of High rise and watch what my essay's video.
The Skyscrapers bring to korea less land but more people to live in. I'll talk about the High rise in the Taiwan. In korea all of the Skyscrapers are for living. even the dormitory of KMLA is 12 floor, and the new cities like Dong-tan have a very high building higher than 50 floors. But in Taiwan things are different. In Taiwan the high building is higher than 30floors, but nobody lives there. Nobody except for the dead people live there. This high building is a cemetery, this cemetery is very large that if the people die they can be burned and their ash can be stored in there. There are lots of other things in the Cemetery, there are lots of chinese scluptors because Taiwan is smilliar to China. But don't you think it's unusual to have high buildings for dead people? I really think it is weird. My home is in 17 floor, and it's pretty high, and we have attics, The views from our house is pretty great. We can see mountains, and we can see far because we live in high floors. It's usual in Korea to live in Skyscrapers, but it's very weird that we have the special buildings for the dead people. Because in korea we have lots of mountains, in our house we can see mountains, but in Kwang won provence, there are lots of mountains, so because of that reason, we don't need to make a skyscrapers just for the dead people. Some one will say it's just waste of money. But I think if just make a small building and store the ashes from the dead people, we can save land, that means that we don't need graves, If we have a small building for the dead people we can save land because it can store lots of ashes in that building, So my opinion is build a building for the dead peoples and we can save lots of lands, and the goverment can make something like ski resorts or places that can make lots of foreigners to come and visit and making them to know lots of good things that korea have, that's my opinion, In Taiwan high cemetery people use different ways of skyscrapers, Taiwan have to use lots of lands for their Nation's economy So they build the skyscraper cemetery, but I think in korea we can make our economy better than now if we have lots of land So I repeat my opinion is that we can make skyscrapers for dead men and because of that we can make our economy better than now.
The Skyscrapers bring to korea less land but more people to live in. I'll talk about the High rise in the Taiwan. In korea all of the Skyscrapers are for living. even the dormitory of KMLA is 12 floor, and the new cities like Dong-tan have a very high building higher than 50 floors. But in Taiwan things are different. In Taiwan the high building is higher than 30floors, but nobody lives there. Nobody except for the dead people live there. This high building is a cemetery, this cemetery is very large that if the people die they can be burned and their ash can be stored in there. There are lots of other things in the Cemetery, there are lots of chinese scluptors because Taiwan is smilliar to China. But don't you think it's unusual to have high buildings for dead people? I really think it is weird. My home is in 17 floor, and it's pretty high, and we have attics, The views from our house is pretty great. We can see mountains, and we can see far because we live in high floors. It's usual in Korea to live in Skyscrapers, but it's very weird that we have the special buildings for the dead people. Because in korea we have lots of mountains, in our house we can see mountains, but in Kwang won provence, there are lots of mountains, so because of that reason, we don't need to make a skyscrapers just for the dead people. Some one will say it's just waste of money. But I think if just make a small building and store the ashes from the dead people, we can save land, that means that we don't need graves, If we have a small building for the dead people we can save land because it can store lots of ashes in that building, So my opinion is build a building for the dead peoples and we can save lots of lands, and the goverment can make something like ski resorts or places that can make lots of foreigners to come and visit and making them to know lots of good things that korea have, that's my opinion, In Taiwan high cemetery people use different ways of skyscrapers, Taiwan have to use lots of lands for their Nation's economy So they build the skyscraper cemetery, but I think in korea we can make our economy better than now if we have lots of land So I repeat my opinion is that we can make skyscrapers for dead men and because of that we can make our economy better than now.
Thank you for reading my essay.
This is a very good start~! But we need some clean-up and editing. Plus some pictures would be nice, with some more details. You have a lot of time, so keep that in mind.
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