2011년 1월 26일 수요일

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Kids in Space

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What if you lived on the International Space Station? Imagine your normal day as it is now, but in space!
In the morning, you get up at 2540 and get dressed in your space Kappa and spaceNorthface. There is no gravity in space, so you float into the kitchen to eat your breakfast of dried pizzaskimchi in a tube, and smashed up hamburger in a plastic space container. Then, instead of taking the bus to school, you hop into a(n) Audi and orbit Earth 2011times.
In the Audi,you do burning science experiments such as determining how good a(n) cat is at playing in space. When the experiments are done, you go outside the Audi for some exercise in space. You play outside the Audi for an hour or more. When you are done exercising, you go back to the International Space Station for other activities such as seeingeating, and watching.
You end the day by sending a(n) man to your parents via the space computer, and they tell you goodnight from Earth, down below.

The black words are the words that I used,

2011년 1월 24일 월요일

Game Review! Class22 Jo Sung-IL

Hello I'm in Class 22 and my name is Jo sung-il and I'm going to write a game review about the Game called Starcraft 2 please read my game review and write a comment.

There is a famous game called Starcraft. It is very famous that almost all the boys know that game. This game have lots of versions, and I'm going to talk about the very recent version of the Starcraft, Starcraft 2. I have a CD Starcraft 2 but because of my computer is not very good I can't do unless my parents upgrade my computer or buy another one. I really wanted to play this game, because in this version you have lots of units, and more powerful units. and more fantastic Graphics that we can easily got interest in it, and play more realistic.

This version of Starcraft is very new, so we can't download in an illegal way, you have to buy a CD like me. You can play 3 species like the other version, but it's units have been upgrade like in ordinary version Starcraft there is a Zerg Colony and there is a unit called sunken but you can't move Sunken to attack. But in this Version you can move Sunken, and in the Protoss Colony some new units are born, The phoenix which is a flying object that attacks the enemy is very good. and this game is in Korean So lots of Koreans can play easily because It's in korean but the other version is only english. That is the one of the reason that the students want this Version more than the old ones.

I really like this version because we have lots of new units, and new Graphics that is really realistic. and it's only korean, It's the good game that we can enjoy when we want to have fun, but don't play this game so much because if you got addicted to this game it's really bad for you, It's only for fun, So don't got furious when you lose, and Play after Study, if you can keep this things, I think that we can enjoy this game very much.

<I think the trailer is under this Game Review!>
Thank you for reading my Game Review!

2011년 1월 21일 금요일

An ode to Cafeteria class-22 Jo sung-IL

Ode to Cafeteria.

Oh Cafeteria, how high you are! you are so high that if we miss our elevator we have to run the stairway.
Oh Cafeteria, how many kinds of foods that you have! you have lots of foods that we can't take our eyes off to them,
Oh Cafeteria We always ran to you after the school period, we always hope that we are not going to miss the elevator, we always hope that you have lots of foods for all of us, and we always hope to have delicious foods.
We really hope what's next day's meal is. We are really hoping that we have enough delicious Cereals to eat tomorrow.
We are really hoping on you.

My history presentation class 22 Jo sung-IL

The Trojan war and Heinrich Schliemann
class 22 Jo-sung-il
Hi, my namer is Jo-sung-IL and I'm in class 22, and today I'll talk two stories about The Trojan War, And who found the ruins of Troy, There is two kinds of stories about The Trojan War, one is greek myth and the other one is Herodotos's book called 'History' The Trojan War in the Greek myths, tell us that the Prince Paris from city of Troy, ran away with the Queen of Sparta, Helene. So the angry king of Sparta, formed an army, and with the other kings and princes in Greece. They invaded City of Troy. The people of Troy tried fought back the Greeks. So the fight continued about ten years, for that many years. that walls of Troy didn't fall down. The Greek General Odysseus, planed a great plan. You probably heard about the Trojan horse, it's very famous horse. that the Greeks used to invade Troy, In side the Trojan horse you can put 30 soldiers, Greeks built that huge horse with wood and destroyed the City of Troy. The Greek general Odysseus really was a real good planner, and one of his soldiers was very good planner and actor so that they fool the people of Troy very easily. What they planned is like put 30 soldiers in The Trojan horse and they waited for the people of troy to pull the horse inside the castle and they can invade the city with the rest of the army, and this plan really worked and the city of Troy destroyed, and queen of Sparta returned to his king back, But what the Herodotos had wrote is quite differently in his book called 'History'. This book was written by Herodotos when he was traveling, he wrote lots of chapters about lots of other stories like The Trojan War, like what I'm saying now, and how the persia got strong, and how can the greeks defend themselves from the persians. In this famous book, Herodotos had wrote that the Prince Paris from troy kidnapped Helene, and when they tried to sail back to Troy, they met a real big storm that they landed on the shores of egypt, instead of troy, But the king of Sparta didn't know that they landed on Egypt, instead of troy. So they invaded Troy, However for the People of Troy they were confused to they really did not know what's happening. Because they too did not know where's prince Paris is, and they are really confused and did not know what to do when the Greeks invaded them, They said to the Greeks that they had no ideas where is prince Paris is, But the Greeks thought they were lying and they invaded anyway so one City fell because of Mistake that the Prince had made, As for Paris he was kick out of Egypt, because of the mistakes that he made, It's quite different that what the Greek myth is saying, and what Herodotos had wrote. But in now a days people believe Herodotos's story more than the Greek Myth, I believe the Herodotos's story more than the Greek myth, because it seems more true than the greek myth, and now I'll talk about the man who found the ruins of Troy, That man is Heinrich Schliemann, He is an German and he lived about 68 years, he found something very long time ago and I'm going to tell you what is it. Heinrich was born in germany and he died in italy. when he was a boy, He read what the llias had wrote in his book. and boy Heinrich believe there was a city called troy. When he became older he had become rich man, and when he became rich man he tried to find the City of Troy, and in 1870s he finally stood up in the hill where he believed that was the place that the city of Troy existed. and finally he found ruins of the Troy, and he had become famous for find an ancient City. He found some arts that is not destroyed a lot and he collected them and studied that the City of Troy was really rich. and the arts that Heinrich collected were in the Berlin's national museum. Before the World war 2 had started. Heinrich made really amazing discovery that we did not know for lots of centuries, and we now know that the The Trojan war was real not fake, because of that we can know lots of others thing about The Trojan War.
thank you for listening to my speech.

2011년 1월 17일 월요일

Writing in many point of views By Sung-IL class 22

First view) Today I woke up l woke up late, I thought I can't have breakfast. but I followed my friends to the cafeteria. There was no P.A catching us. So we got our foods and started eating. After that my friend and I play ping-pong. I won by 11-8, but I thought he was really good at that. After that we played Baseball. I was the pitcher but we losed the first game, but the second game and we won. after that we played C.A. My C.A is basket ball because of that I put 'played' because basketball is playing. we losed because our teammates foul. that foul, led us to lose 2 points, because of the free shooting. I really enjoyed sunday, I wish that I can enjoy all the days in GLPS too!

Second view) You wake up, You wake up late, you think you don't have any time for breakfast, But you followed your friends and there is no P.A waiting for you. So you have your breakfast today. You'll play Ping pong today with your Friends. You'll win this game score 11-8, After that you'll play baseball, You will be the pitcher, You'll lose the first game, but you'll win the second game. After that You'll play your C.A Basket ball. You'll lose because of the foul that your teammate had made. You'll enjoy Sunday and You'll hope the other days will like this day.

Third view) Sung-il woke up, he woke up late. He really thought he was gonna late for breakfast, but he followed his friends, in his surprise there was no P.A catching them for being late for breakfast, he was glad that there was no P.A catching him. When he finished his meal he played ping pong he won the game by 11-8 He was happy. After that he became the pitcher at the baseball game he lose the game for first time, but he won in the second time. He played his C.A basket ball it was the very exciting part of the day for him. But he losed because of  his Teammate's mistake. He like sunday and he hope he'll like the other days too.

High Rise Class 22 Jo Sung-IL

Hi my name is Jo sung-il, My essay will be about the High rise of Taiwan cemetery.
 This essay is about the High rise. There is a website named Highrise visit Mr Garrioch's blog, www.Glps15.blogspot.com , in there you can click the title of High rise and watch what my essay's video.

The Skyscrapers bring to korea less land but more people to live in. I'll talk about the High rise in the Taiwan. In korea all of the Skyscrapers are for living. even the dormitory of KMLA is 12 floor, and the new cities like Dong-tan have a very high building higher than 50 floors. But in Taiwan things are different. In Taiwan the high building is higher than 30floors, but nobody lives there. Nobody except for the dead people live there. This high building is a cemetery, this cemetery is very large that if the people die they can be burned and their ash can be stored in there. There are lots of other things in the Cemetery, there are lots of chinese scluptors because Taiwan is smilliar to China. But don't you think it's unusual to have high buildings for dead people? I really think it is weird. My home is in 17 floor, and it's pretty high, and we have attics, The views from our house is pretty great. We can see mountains, and we can see far because we live in high floors. It's usual in Korea to live in Skyscrapers, but it's very weird that we have the special buildings for the dead people. Because in korea we have lots of mountains, in our house we can see mountains, but in Kwang won provence, there are lots of mountains, so because of that reason, we don't need to make a skyscrapers just for the dead people. Some one will say it's just waste of money. But I think if just make a small building and store the ashes from the dead people, we can save land, that means that we don't need graves, If we have a small building for the dead people we can save land because it can store lots of ashes in that building, So my opinion is build a building for the dead peoples and we can save lots of lands, and the goverment can make something like ski resorts or places that can make lots of foreigners to come and visit and making them to know lots of good things that korea have, that's my opinion, In Taiwan high cemetery people use different ways of skyscrapers, Taiwan have to use lots of lands for their Nation's economy So they build the skyscraper cemetery, but I think in korea we can make our economy better than now if we have lots of land So I repeat my opinion is that we can make skyscrapers for dead men and because of that we can make our economy better than now.

 Thank you for reading my essay.

2011년 1월 13일 목요일

Diamante Poem Class 22 Sung-IL

Turtle
Slow, Cute
Walking, Sleeping, Crawling
Slow,  Sleep, Fast, Cute
Eating, Running, Hearing
Run, hear
Rabbit

Rats
Dirty, Disgust
Squeaking, Disgusting, Sneaking
Squeak, Disgust, Catch, Cute
Catching, Crying, Sleeping
Catch, Cute
Cat

P.A
Strict, Kind
Shouting, Sneaking, Catching
Strict, Kind, Teach, Nice
Teach, Help
T.A

What I underlined is not related to the first line but to last line

First Diamante Poem I put turtle and Rabbit inside because they are really opposite. because of their speed.
Second Diamante Poem I put rat and cat in it because Cat eat Rat.
Thrid Diamante poem I put P.A and T.A because of fun.....


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2011년 1월 12일 수요일

Spring,summer,fall,winter,spring.


I think the monk is tryiing to teach his student the importance of life Because the student really doesn't mean to kill that snake and fish he really didn't know that they will die just tying them to stone. So the monk is trying to teachhim the importance of life. I have a similar experence. When I was going home from school, one of my friends called bad words to the kids who's playing at the playground,  at first they were just looking at them selves trying to know what's going on.and they ran away.  few minutes later. A girl who's in our class came with the two boys and their mom. Their mom said 'My daughter had told me that you are kind and smart, but I think my daughter told me wrong." she said to him to go home and She'll tell the teacher tomorrow. My teacher called my friend tommorrow and he told him 'Now you are name is baby, because you said bad words to whom that did nothing wrong. and he told us that now call him baby and if someone didn't call him that way. They'll get their nicknames to and If my friend said to them to stop calling him baby He'll get a new nickname and he'll clean up the class room for the rest of the year. My friend had a hard time at school, my teacher did harsh on him. and I think he deserved that and I think he's giving lesson to him like the monk and his student. But I think that my teacher give him hard lessons.

2011년 1월 10일 월요일

Writing Chain: "I Think The Program of The GLPS Is Very Strict" Class 22 Sung-IL

In my opinion, GLPS's program is very strict. If students speak korean we got E.O.P papers E.O.P means English only policy. If you are talking Korean and if you are caught by P.A you have to memorize the hard writings like old pops.
GLPS is a program for English and if we speak Korean we'll get a E.O.P papers like what I said before. But I think that Giving yellow cards to one's who speaks korean is not bad. after all you are here to study not play, If you are going to play in here it's a waste of money. We spent a lot of money coming here and we want to learn something because we spent a lot of money, If you speak korean I think it's a waste of your money. You have to practice your english or else your english level will stay where you are, and we don't want our english level staying where you are now. and I think they are doing the right thing to get our english level higher. And about the yellow cards and Red cards, we got yellow cards and red cards when we do something very wrong. and we should try not to get any of these.  Any for green card we should try very hard to get this card. If you got a lot of green cards you can get a prize at the end of the camp. and we should try really hard. If you want to get this card you have to speak only english and be nice to your friends and your teachers, and just don't do any thing wrong.
I think the program is very strict but I think I like it that way because we can get our english better. So the conclusion is GLPS is strict but it is a good camp. I like it here, and here you got lots of lessons english except for Math. I like Debate and writing and History and I like my C.A basketball. I just like every thing and I think we should keep the rules to make this better.  Thank you for reading my Wrting Chain Thank you.